ONLINE PROFILE EXAMPLE
BEFORE & AFTER
BEFORE & AFTER
CLIENT: Female, professional, age 40+, who wasn't getting match responses that fit her interests
Original Online Profile:
(This profile was too generic and returned mediocre responses)
Original Online Profile:
(This profile was too generic and returned mediocre responses)
Profile Name: Happy and Positive About Life
Hello,
I am happy, love to laugh, respectful, intelligent, playful and like to make things happen rather than complain.
My family and friends are important to me. Sometimes it's the family you're born into and sometimes it's the one you make for yourself.
I am looking for a man that is caring and easy going. He has an open-mind and a fun-loving attitude.
I am also the proud owner of an 10 year old female Shih Tzu. So, my furry friend and I come as a duo.
If this sounds like you, I look forward to hearing from you and best of luck in your search!
Revised Profile:
(This profile is specific and spoke directly to her ideal matches)
(This profile is specific and spoke directly to her ideal matches)
New Profile Name: Charming Rebel
Headline: Looking For A Teddy Bear With An Edge
I have a huge amount of energy and a strong need for adventure and novelty. I’ve been told I have an energy that others gravitate towards.
I couple these aspects of myself with a supportive and nurturing side. My family is important to me. There are days I love them, and others, well....
When I need to unwind, you will find me re-organizing my living space, going for a long walk, baking pies and pastries or doing basic home renovations.
Some other things you need to know about me:
- I have travelled across Canada and admit to getting lost in all 10 provinces
- I have 4 tattoos and have owned 4 motorcycles – with more of each to come
- My 10 year old female Shih-Tzu and I come as a package deal
- I have a sock and watch fetish
- Sarcasm is the spice of life so bring it on!!
You are a non-smoking gentleman that is motivated, respectful, honest and easy going. You have an open-mind and a fun-loving attitude. You are someone who has presence, is honest and is always straight forward.
What we both want is a best friend and partner. Someone who will stand by our side no matter what life throws our way.
Bonus: If you cook, have a dog and own a motorcycle.
