ONLINE DATING PROFILE EXAMPLE: BEFORE & AFTER
Client: A Toronto Female, age 40+, who wasn't getting match responses that fit her interests |
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ORIGINAL PROFILE
Profile Name: Happy and Positive About Life Headline: Hello and welcome to my profile, I have an energy that is infectious. I am happy, love to laugh, respectful of my family and friends, intelligent, playful and like to make things happen rather than complain. My family is important to me. Sometimes it's the family you're born into and sometimes it's the one you make for yourself. I am looking for a man that is caring and easy going. He has an open-mind and a fun-loving attitude. I want a best friend and partner. I am also the proud owner of an 10 year old female Shih Tzu. So, my furry friend and I come as a duo. If this sounds like you, I look forward to hearing from you and best of luck in your search! So, your profile is now working.
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REVISED PROFILE
Profile Name: Charming Rebel Headline: Looking For A Teddy Bear With An Edge I have a huge amount of energy and a strong need for adventure and novelty. I’ve been told I have an energy that others gravitate towards. I couple these aspects of myself with a supportive and nurturing side. My family is important to me. There are days I love them, and others, well.... When I need to unwind, you will find me re-organizing my living space, going for a long walk, baking pies and pastries or doing basic home renovations. Some other things you need to know about me:
You are a non-smoking gentleman that is motivated, respectful, honest and easy going. You have an open mind and a fun-loving attitude. You are someone who has presence, is honest and is always straight forward. What we both want is a best friend and partner. Someone who will stand by our side no matter what life throws our way. Bonus: If you cook, have a dog and own a motorcycle. |
